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Does my grammar look good?

xhikaru_sorax asked the question:


My English isn’t all that great. I just recently came from another country. So learning English for a few years has been a quite hard for me. So please take a quick look at my writing and see if it looks good so far. If you notice any error, please let me know right away. I need to finish up today. Thank you so much.
- Planning and preparing art classes, art events, exhibitions and art galleries.
- Helping and encouraging residents to unlock their creative potential.
- Completing the tasks before the due date; for instance, paper mache Santa Claus, over 200 Christmas cards, harvest drawings - just to name a few
The placement where I work revolves around any sort of visual arts, and it would be important to have some skills in drawing, painting, sculpturing, and etc.
It’s an asset to be able to account all the prices of the art pieces, so it can be put in the sales and be bought by very happy costumers
Residents love classic music,
and they also love to see someone who can play a variety of exotic music instruments. In addition, it is nice to be able to read a very complicated music notes and play it well.

Activities I have done at work to demonstrate these skills.
Oral Communications
- Persuading residents to come to the art event and motivating them to do the artwork when they are discouraged
- Completing Christmas tasks, such as creating Christmas cards and building Santa Claus statue before the deadline
- Arranging the documents and information of residents in the certain sections with subheadings
- Creating price tags for the art pieces
- In order to find residents, there’s a list of information of their whereabouts
Three Work Habits I’ve demonstrated at my work place.
- Organizing the art works and cleaning up the mess afterwards
- Communicating with residents and staff
- Coming up some creative ideas for the little art details

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One Response to “Does my grammar look good?”

  1. Adam K on January 3rd, 2009 4:21 pm

    UR doing great girl i couldn’t tell the difference bettween you and some one whoed gratuated from oxford (i actualy do know a guy from oxford)